CAMPING
Yay just my luck to go camping during a storm I thought to myself ‘BOOM BOOM’ the thunder danced about in the sky. I poked my head out of the tent to see the trees being blown around and leaves together forming a whirlwind, “WAA” my brother cried as he was scared to death of storms. “What a mammoth of a storm” Dad yelled over the noise of the sirens screaming in the distance and the rain pelting down. Yuck I could smell my brother’s wet pants as he screamed louder and louder. “Shut up” I shrieked at him over the noise of the thunder. “Hey let’s just calm down and have a piece of chocolate” Mum pleaded, yum chocolate had never tasted so good ahh the sensational taste warmed my mouth.
“Let’s all try and go to sleep as we need rest” Dad stated, why oh why did I agree to go camping in the first place I thought as my head touched the pillow.
BY BRIANNA
2 comments:
i loved it it was really desctiptive.
one thing, theres a part of your story that i didn't really get its around the chocolate part of your story.
Made me laugh, very cool. :)
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