Practice post for Room6.
Room 6 Blog
Wednesday, February 12, 2014
Thursday, June 14, 2012
true stream
OK SO AT SCHOOL WE WERE DOING STREAM STUDY AND WE HAD TO PAINT A PICTURE OF THE STREAM AND WRITE A POEM TO MATCH. MINE IS THE ODD ONE OUT BECAUSE MY STREAM WAS BROWN (LIKE THE STREAM WAS) AND EVERYONE ELSE S WAS BLUE AND THEIR POEMS MATCHED AND THIS IS MY POEM!!! ENJOY OR NOT I DONT REALLY CARE!
The rocks were brown like meatloaf
The water was clear like a window
I hear birds choking on seeds and bug real
slow like
The water sounds like water trickling over
slimy rocks
Cars zooming past
The sun is hot where the sunscreen?! I feel
like a piece of burning coal
Can
you turn off the sun please?
Im dying!
Tanisha Haunted House
There I was glued
tight to the ground struggling my way out of this horrible place; I knew
something bad is going to happen any time now.
Suddenly my legs started to move closer and closer to the Haunted House
as if someone or something was controlling me to enter the haunted house for
some reason.
‘drip drop drip drop’ blood drips from the roof of the house, it smelt
of creatures slowly and painfully dying of that appalling smell, hollow trees
leaning over the house trying to capture it with its leaves.
I took the slightest and tiniest step onto the front porch of the house
then ‘creak creak’ the door ever slow slightly opened and the strangest thing
happened to the house that night.
The whole house lit up so brightly and the table was filled with delious
cupcakes and cookies.
I was egger to step on in and enjoy myself but my legs were chain locked
into the ground I couldn’t get out, nothing was working I couldn’t shove a pit.
I was trapped until whatever inside will set me free but If I even
whispered something could grabbed and tear me appear I had to be careful no one
will hear or see me.
All I could hear was the echoing of faint piano keys in the distance or
I was just losing my mind, piece by piece.
LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJ
By Tanisha Lawrence
One slip changes everything
One slip
changes everything
By Teigan
I look up to see the clouds are
closing in. Time to get home before the rain comes. To slow it pelts down on my
face harder and harder with each drop. I find myself at the stream and I have
to cross it’s the only way there’s no bridge. But the waters growing, and
swelling fast. I lower myself into the water tightly grasping the roots that
were slightly ajar from the bank. Walking out as far as I could while still
holding on. The currants not to strong slowly I let go edging farther out. Very
carefully taking each step. I reach out
a hand and grasped the bank. Slowly pulling my self up when AHHH!!!!!!! The
bank gives way and I plummet into the icy water getting swept away. I can’t get
my footing something crashes into me and every thing goes black.
Wednesday, June 13, 2012
sounds of a creaky old house
By Ivy
Jeffries
Creak, creak, creak
I can’t believe my Mum told me I should go to see the
‘haunted house’ with my friends it’s so like…
“Brr man it’s, cold don’t you think, um guys, um Keely,
err Grace?”
“Pswpisperwsp”
“Huh is, is that you Keely?”
The thud of some ones heals touching the ground,
screaming in the distance, the wind whistles flowing inside the creaky house
form millions of gapes in the walls. Thunder crashing coming closer from over
the mountains. Suddenly silence absolutely silent. The sound of my heart
beating boom-boom, boom-boom- boom-boom. One foot after the other slowly making
my way through the hall way.
A Living Nightmare
I stood at the rusted gate of the house on 13 Elm St. Why did I let my friends talk me into that stupid dare game! I entered the front yard which was a grave yard. Every tombstone was overgrown with ivy.
The rainclouds overhead parted, the light of the full moon shone down on everything. I saw that some graves have been dug up, and the coffins were empty. I heard a howl that sent shivers down my spine. The moon light disappeared as clouds went over the moon. A gale started up, the wind cut through me like a knife. The dead trees that went around the outside of the property started creaking and groaning like living things.
It started to rain. I ran over the overgrown path to the old and rotting deck. Lightning crashed. I saw the mansion for the first time. It was once a white house but age has left paint a dark grey and peeling, half of the windows were cracked or broken.
There was a tall spire on the left side of the house. On top of the spire was a weather vane spinning madly in the wind. Bats were fluttering around the top of the tower squeaking their ghastly squeaks. I started to wonder what horrible creatures this house may hold: ghosts, zombies, living skeletons, vampires, werewolves, and maybe even Frankenstein’s monster, the list could go on forever. As I was standing getting drenched in the rain a terror stricken scream echoed around inside the house.
That’s when the moaning sounded. Numerous moans echoed around me. As dark figures limped towards I screamed. I screamed until a hand of rotting flesh covered my mouth. When the undead sunk their mouldy teeth into the back of my head I thought why did I have to die this way.
By Max Frethey
camping in a horrible strom
Broom! Mum will the
rain ever stop its been raining for 2 days non stop this vacation stinks broom! The forecast announced it would
clear up.
broom!
be quiet Mikalya I want to get some sleep broom!
Good
luck the storm has other ideas broom!
Crack! Crash! What was that! Probably just a branch falling off a tree broom!
Go
away stupid storm broom! Rumble! The
storm doesn’t like that idea he he. Mum I’m hungry can we have something to
eat.
You just ate, so I get hungry when it’s raining.
Broom! Ok there’s
some fruit in my bag.
By Liam
Tuesday, June 12, 2012
The Return Of The Waves
By Tumatauenga
One long, dull day we went to camp and it was very boring.
Finally something fun came up. We packed our togs and rode on the bus to little
kaiteriteri. And set off to enjoy our day. Once we got there Mr. Herring set
the rules and off we went into the ocean to go kayaking. It was so fun I passed
Genesis like a speeding bullet. After half an hour or so it was getting tiring.
And the water was clear as a dirty window; I went around the yellow buoy just
skimming it with the side of my kayak. I was paddling my hardest until the end
when I just sat and started floating by. After I got out we went back to camp
with a towel round my waist and sand in my pants.
Case Of The Poisoned Plants
By
Tumatauenga Dixon
Bang! The doors
shut, with me outside, sad and moneyless. And the worse thing is that when I
went home I told my Nana and was she mad! It was so loud I could hardly hear my
own heart beat.
”Hahahahaha”
laughed my old boss “I have poisoned all the water in Metropolis so all the
citizens shall go to the only hospitals in the city for 12 kilometers so that
all there money shall run into my pocket! “Hahahahaha”
Mean while I was
walking down the street and I saw come across a puddle of a sticky green
substance, it looked very familiar I had seen the same green, icky goo before…
It was in my old
bosses’ shirt pocket! The day he fired me. But what does it do? Im gonna get to
the bottom of this! Back at work
“What do you mean
he’s onto us, I have this all figured out!”
“You better!” Said the man on the other side of the phone.
RING RING “Yes” he
exclaimed
“I know you’re
behind something” I yelled
“I’ll meet you in
the abandoned warehouse tonight!”
The later that day
I went to the abandoned warehouse When I got there through the pitch black, the
only thing I could see was the light from the half open door.
“Hello Detective!”
“What do you want?”
I said then the lights turned on. “For you to stay out of my business!” Then he
pulled out a pistol and started shooting at me! I reached into my pocket for my
gun, it wasn’t there I only had my lunch in there and the first thing I grabbed
was my banana so I threw it at him and it hit him right in the middle of the
forehead making him fall over backwards. I ran for my car once I got in I drove
home in a flash.
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